Someone wrote in [community profile] jsmn_kinkmeme 2015-11-25 03:56 pm (UTC)

Re: Fill: Going home (1/1)

*slow exhale* *hard swallow*

I'm not the OP, but thank you, A!A, thank you for writing this beautiful piece. Strange's hand gripping Grant's thigh with no overtones of sexual desire is incredibly moving. Thank you for not letting Grant lose it in an uncharacteristic fit of passion, because Grant wouldn't, he would hold back as much as possible, which just makes his whimpering and his clinging even more heartbreaking. Key word: guilt. Key detail: Wellington's cockade. Key sentence: "The Major is silent as they board the ship that will return them to England." Grant without banter, without his words of comfort or explanation, is truly horrible. I send you many sad hugs through the ether.

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