I'm here for all the Norrell&Childermass fix it fics, and this one perfectly hit the spot!
Aside from doing right by Childermass, I really enjoyed your writing style, which is evocative, without being overly floral. This in particular:
Beyond Norrell’s palm, on the other side of the door, corridors twisted; the ends and beginnings of hallways shifted and conjoined; dust took the shape of stairwells; sconces threw their light around corners and shadows hung from ceilings like curtains.
I thought that whole paragraph was wonderful! Very Clarke-like. :)
Re: Fill: A complication
Aside from doing right by Childermass, I really enjoyed your writing style, which is evocative, without being overly floral. This in particular:
Beyond Norrell’s palm, on the other side of the door, corridors twisted; the ends and beginnings of hallways shifted and conjoined; dust took the shape of stairwells; sconces threw their light around corners and shadows hung from ceilings like curtains.
I thought that whole paragraph was wonderful! Very Clarke-like. :)