Someone wrote in [community profile] jsmn_kinkmeme 2015-07-11 09:34 am (UTC)

Re: FILL: A Distraction (6/6)

There is nothing about this fill that I don't absolutely adore.

First of all, I commend you on writing the easiest to follow threesome fic I've read in a long, long time. I love OT3s, but it's so difficult to keep track of what limbs belong to whom and who is doing what to whomever else. Not so here though, so I am a very happy reader.

Technicalities out of the way, there is something about your writing that really works for me. It flows well, and the style of it mashes very well with Clarke's own writing and the general 'mood' of the fandom. Your Character voices are also completely on point, and I loved Childermass' POV here. It was nice to see the gears ticking even as he himself got dragged more and more into the situation.

Everyone's dynamics and interactions felt really true, and I loved how bittersweet the ending was. Jonathan being the one with surprising insight and control of the aftermath really worked for me as well. It is rather easy to underestimate Mr Strange, isn't it Childermass?

Thanks a lot for writing this, I really hope there'll be more from you!

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