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☆ Round One!

Welcome to the first round of the Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell Kink Meme at [community profile] jsmn_kinkmeme!

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Re: FILL: uncommon kindness (3/3)

(Anonymous) 2015-07-30 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh. Oh. Oh. This part just bowled me over. The dream sequence was great, and my heart was clenching at the schmoop and sentiment. AND THEN THE SEX CAME AND EVERYTHING GOT EVEN BETTER.

I really like the way you've written the sex here: the timing of it and the language you've used. It's so hot. Particular things that got me were:
* The focus on Segundus' lips
* The way Segundus gets turned on by sucking Childermass' cock and the way Childermass finds that really arousing
* "little sounds he doesn't quite manage, sounds overwhelmed by pleasure"
* "Yes. Yes... touch yourself, I wish to see you do so; I want to watch you—" Because Holy Fuck Childermass. Hoooooly fuck say that again.

But but but. The part that really got me. The part I had to re-read several times before I moved on. Was this:
"Childermass does not say anything, only tips his head back a little, baring the hollow of his throat"
Oh Christ. The confident submission of this gesture is just so... auungh. Fucking Childermass. Fuck. Fuck.

So in conclusion: I was enjoying this fic already and that sex scene was the delicious icing on the cake.